Showing posts with label novel writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label novel writing. Show all posts

Another step on the journey...


When I’m asked why I write, the answer is pretty straightforward—there’s a story (an idea or a scene or a character or a combination of all three) in my head that's occupying my internal landscape, and the only way to maintain some semblance of sanity is to write it down. Once I start writing, I fall in love with the process of transforming whatever is living in my imagination into something visible. This has the advantage of clarifying and creating sense out of what is often a nebulous concept.

The beauty of this misty amorphous idea is its openness—the potential is cosmic—especially when writing science-fiction/fantasy/urban fantasy. The downside is while I’m having a brilliant time in my own sweet world, I can’t share it in this form. The upside of writing and publishing a book is that the conversion from abstract to concrete is complete.

Of course, there is always the possibility that no one else on the planet has any interest in what goes on inside my head, but the desire to share, to give back, and, hopefully, for others to enjoy my stories is a powerful one.

Veiled Planet started life in 2014, written in a blast of furious activity as a NaNoWriMo project. This is an annual internet-based creative writing challenge  that takes place during the month of November where the goal is to write 1,667 words a day, and emerge at the end with a 50,000 word first draft of a novel. This is a serious task if you’re working, have kids, or any kind of social life, but gives aspiring writers the chance to flex and build their creative muscles. The sense of achievement I got from participating and achieving my target inspired me to keep writing.

I put the rough draft aside and kept it as something to work on while I rested whatever novel I was writing at the time. Okay, it has taken several years more than anticipated to expand and edit that draft. However, Veiled Planet is due back from my editor at the end of this week, and that means the pre-publish butterflies are starting to flutter as I’m aiming to publish mid-June. This is the first book in the Hidden World Trilogy, though I’ve made a promise to myself that Book Two will not take another three years to write and publish.

I’ve always read science fiction since my older brother started buying paperbacks way back when, but apart from a flash fiction story, this is my first sci-fi novel. The book also falls into the YA (young adult) category as the heroine, Kara, is eighteen, and the story tells of her journey from an introverted student to a strong young woman who faces tremendous odds in a fight to choose her destiny. (Yes, that’s me cheering ‘Go, Kara!’ from the sidelines.)

I’m thrilled, apprehensive, and can’t wait to release Veiled Planet.
Best wishes

WIPs, Lightbulb Moments, and Virtuous Resolutions



The WIP

Finishing a novel means saying goodbye to characters, places, and adventures I’ve invested time and effort in creating, and a sense of loss accompanies their departure. However, this rarely happens till after the book is published. In early March, as I came to the end of the first draft of Book Three of my urban fantasy trilogy, I was surprised to be experiencing a degree of sadness, though this journey wasn't yet on the home stretch.

I had  settled on a title, but discovered the one I'd chosen appears on several books already...so back to scratch. And without doubt, I have several painstaking edits to complete before a version is ready to send to a professional editor, plus the cover, and formatting to organize before I say adios. Yet, after two and a half years with Tatya, Vanse, Forked Lightning, and not forgetting  Angelus, whose evil scheming knows no bounds, part of me already laments their upcoming departure from my internal landscape.

A Lightbulb Moment

I’ve found the best way to deal with this phase is to throw myself into writing something else straight away. While resting the previous books in the series, I’ve worked on a science-fiction nano novel written a few years ago, and this is about seventy-five percent finished. As I prepared to continue with this book, an idea I’ve been nursing for a while burst, more or less fully formed, into my head. The seed came from a business sign I'd noticed one day, and the instant I saw it something sparked in my brain, and every time I passed that way, I'd think about what kind of story this could be. Before I could start on the sci-fi revisions, a flood of potential images and ideas flashed through my mind about a new novel stemming from that sign - in the detective/mystery genre. Maybe I could write a novella? Three 20-25,000 word novellas could perhaps be published later in a single volume?

With the WIP laid to rest, I took a deep breath and plunged into an exciting new world. Five weeks later, I'm trying hard not to feel too smug, because I've completed the first draft of a novella. Yes, it’s more minimal than usual, because I wasn’t sure how many words I’d have to play with to stay within my target, but it currently lies resting snugly side by side with the WIP. I'll spend what’s left of my scheduled break with my older sci-fi friends,

Suddenly I feel like one of those TV chefs who have half a dozen pots on the boil, rushing from one to the other in a manic frenzy of chopping, stirring, and flinging spices into bubbling concoctions. But there the comparison ends, because I’ve no guarantee of producing a story readers will like, although the chefs always seem to serve an acceptable gourmet meal when they’re finished. But still, I live in hope, and the more I practice my craft… at least in theory… the better my stories should be!

Getting organized

I’m the first to admit I find it difficult to achieve the basic mind set needed for the marketing that an authorpreneur ought to do, and a dim light is slowly dawning that neither good intentions nor will power are enough to achieve my goals. But determination to change this around is growing. (Really? mutters my inner cynic. I’ll believe it when I see it.) A friend told me recently, if you want to get something done, you must have a plan of action. And even more necessary is writing down the steps needed to accomplish your goal.

Consequently, I’ve become a compulsive list compiler, but don’t laugh, because although I hang my head in embarrassment that after a year of checking out printing websites, I still hadn’t ordered any business cards, I can congratulate myself on achieving that goal! Well, they’re in the mail en route, and just now coming.

The second goal getting closer is setting up an email list of subscribers to a newsletter. (A Very Important step for the indie writer my research informs me.) By announcing it, I’m increasing my chances of attaining it, if for no other reason than to save myself a measure of embarrassment. I have considered, and investigated this previously, but as is my pattern, proceeded no further, letting the idea slide merrily off the cliff of virtuous resolutions, and into the muddy swamp of my subconscious where it's been partying with my other neglected goals. Step one is taken as I’ve signed up to mail-chimp, the to-do list is waiting, and hopefully everything will be in place for mid June. 

Today's Haiku
COFFEE SHOP
the muzak's fast beat
speeds the caffeine junkie's pulse
and time fast-forwards

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On Writing, James Patterson, And On Being An Authorpreneur


Writing and marketing are two aspects of being an authorpreneur, so this month, I'm sharing a few thoughts about both activities.* 

On Writing and James Patterson's Master Class

Neither talent nor desire can be taught, and time may reveal your talent doesn't match your ambition. Nonetheless, while studying those who are more successful is no guarantee of achieving the same triumphs, it can stimulate ideas or show you more effective methods. Hence the decision to take James Paterson's online writing masterclass. Now Patterson is a genre writer, as am I, but there the similarity ends. He is a highly successful prodigious novelist, and I, well… I'm a writer in search of readers, and looking for ways to be more productive.

The point I'm discussing today from Patterson's class is the same writing advice as that given by Randy Ingermanson of the 'Snowflake' method: the first step is to plan, and to plan well. The more detailed the outline, the easier it is to get on with the business of writing. I know authors discuss whether they're pantsters or planners (see the Featured Post in the side bar), but if you want to go from A to B as efficiently as possible, you follow a map. Even if you like the scenic route, without a map, you'll take wrong turns and undoubtedly arrive later than you expected. Not that the latter isn't enjoyable, and as no one size fits all when it comes to putting words on the page, the choice is yours.

For me, composing a first draft offers freedom without anxiety or fear (that comes later!), and is one of the joys of writing. I find seeing a story, which previously existed only in my head, come alive on the page is a thrilling experience. Taking time and enjoying that creative process is, without doubt, one reason many people prefer not to outline. My previous experience when working this way has been that, although I had character, setting, premise and even an ending in my head, I always came to a point when a gap appeared between the middle and the end, and I had to stop and decide how to bridge that space. Spending time on outlining eliminates this difficulty. 

Another effect I noticed when outlining was that as the details became clearer, the urge to stop planning and begin working on the story increased. But I resisted the pull, and by the time I'd finished the outline, and was ready to knuckle down and start writing, I was really eager to get going. I also benefited from spotting a few plot flaws and character weaknesses and dealt with them before I'd invested too much time and effort going in the wrong direction.

I began outlining the third and final novel in my paranormal urban fantasy trilogy, Samsara, on January 1st, and finished the first draft on the 13th April. This was a little behind schedule as despite budgeting in regular breaks–both from writing and social media–I came unstuck in the penultimate chapter. The problem wasn't the story line; I'd simply not given myself sufficient detail, and kept pausing so I could figure out my protagonist's next physical action (after all, Armageddon takes more than a passing sentence or two). I took a week and a half to write that chapter. Enough said. Lesson learned, (thank you, Mr. Patterson), and book three is now resting in a cozy corner of my subconscious.

On Being An Authorpreneur

The aspect of being an independent author and publisher that daunts me is the marketing. I do read as much as I can about the topic (I find Joanna Penn gives excellent advice), and continue to learn, though it often feels as if I'm blundering blindfolded through a room chock-full of people, half of whom are also floundering as we drown in our own good intentions. 

I'm full of admiration for those who effortlessly flow from one social media site to another and still find time to write their novels. However I recognize my limits, and as an introvert, promotion isn't an occupation that suits my natural inclinations. Reviews, email lists, giveaways, blog tours, interviews, competitions, and the ongoing advertising of the current book, all devour precious writing time, and prioritizing means there's always something that slithers off the end of the list. 

On the positive side, marketing means I'm out there in the electronic/digital world, which is often enlivening, and I gain energy and encouragement from engaging with readers and other writers. My latest pet project is looking for inspiration (aware that inspiration can only carry me so far) and advice on how to follow through on my PR resolutions.

* An authorpreneur (aka writerpreneur) is defined as someone who builds a business by writing and marketing one or more books.

Writing Update

While the WIP is resting, I had planned to continue revising my science fiction nano novel, which has been on the back burner for a while. This has been through the ProWritingAid grinder, and is ready to read with an eye for those mistakes which have slipped passed. However, I had a light bulb moment, and instead have decided to write a novella, which will be the first in a trilogy. I've written a brief outline and am expanding this into a more detailed one. My thoughts are to initially publish the three novellas, and later on, possibly release them together in one book.  I'm seriously excited by this idea as one my goals is to increase the number of books I publish, and this offers the possibility of achieving that, as well as the enjoyment of creating new characters and their exploits. Watch this space…

Today's Haiku  
pink cherry blossom
and yellow gorse in bloom speak
of Spring's sweet caress

Useful Links:
If you're interested, here's the link to James Patterson's Master Class http://bit.ly/22Z6vRa
Joanna Penn has a host of resources available on her website, and a visit to her website is a well worthwhile investment http://www.thecreativepenn.com/
Randy Ingermanson's Website also offers a wealth of helpful advice: http://bit.ly/1rsoR1Y

If you're a Wattpad member, I have several short stories posted on the site:

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To all story lovers out there, good reading, and to those of you who write, good writing.


To be or not to be...the question of verb tense.


Traditionally stories were told using the past tense, ‘Once upon a time there was...’ but you will often find today's authors writing in the present tense. One advantage of the present tense is the sense of immediacy it gives. If it's done well, the reader is one with the narrator straight away – especially if the writer is using the first person Point Of View which is a popular choice for this tense. Another advantage of present tense and first person POV is more freedom to be creative when expressing a character's thoughts and perceptions. 

The disadvantages are that any inconsistencies stand out more easily, and giving information about the past can seem contrived. And if it isn't done well, the reader can feel like  someone with attention deficit disorder. Use of the present tense should be a deliberate choice, not used simply because it is perceived to be a modern way of writing.

However, not everyone is in favor of this development. Phillip Pullman, in an article in the Guardian, 18th Sept., 2010, makes a number of valid points against overuse of the present tense and argues in favor of the past tense as it allows a writer to take advantage of the full range of English tenses.

Sometimes switching tense is a good exercise to try out with a short story. A couple of times, I've written something in the present and swapped to the past tense, and vice versa, with interesting results. Although I wrote the first draft of Eddie's War in the past tense, I found changing to the present was particularly effective as its use amped up the drama. 

I’m using the past tense for my current WIP (Book 3 in the Samsara Trilogy) novel as I find it a more natural way to write, and I don’t think I could pull off writing in the present tense with my use of flashbacks. But as with many literary topics, subjective opinion plays a major role, but without doubt, choice of verb tense is an important decision when writing your novel.

Writing Update

By this time next week, I hope to have finished the first draft of the final book of my paranormal/urban fantasy trilogy. I've been pushing hard, though that doesn't necessarily mean the writing is coming any quicker, but it's paying off. I know  I've still to face the trials of editing, (and re-editing) but getting this draft down is a hugely satisfying step closer to publication...yeah!

Today's Haiku
bright moon peeps through tree
branches before being eaten
by lace edged dark clouds

Links:

Phillip Pullman call time on the present tense: http://bit.ly/1Oe5mC4

Eddie's War: http://bit.ly/1ljUtmM

If you're a Wattpad member, I have several short stories posted on the site:


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To all story lovers out there, good reading, and to those of you who write, good writing.






The Three Ds of Writing


Achieving goals in any field takes more than just desire, but if you possess even a small amount of the following three qualities, it will increase your chances of success.

Determination

Yesterday I took a day off, because I needed some social life to balance my writing life, although if your life is like mine (and most people I know), getting that work/leisure balance right is a juggling act, that despite endless practice, is rarely easy. My experience is that determination varies, like waves hitting the shoreline. Sometimes huge crunchers thunder onto the beach, and on other days, tiny wavelets lap gently at the shore. Yet as long as the wind pushes over the surface of the sea, those waves will keep coming. So consider determination in the same way: as long as you keep trying, you'll get closer to realizing your dreams.

Discipline

Developing the habit of writing regularly takes discipline.

     'Exercise the writing muscle every day, even if it is only a letter, notes,
     a title list, a character sketch, a journal entry. Writers are like dancers,
     like athletes. Without that exercise, the muscles seize up.' – Jane Yolen.

Each writer has their own rhythm, their own way of tapping into their creative process. I’m still learning what works for me and change my schedule from time to time. Sometimes I write as soon as I get up, stick at it for as long as I can, then leave my imaginary world and return to this one. I’ve also had periods of working later in the day when I've given myself a word quota and not stopped till I’ve reached my goal. Sometimes words flow, at other times I have to encourage my hesitant, reluctant sentences onto the page. Sometimes when they do come, they’re not what I want, but at least if there are words on the page, I've got something to work with.

Drive

I found the following explanations of the word 'drive' in my dictionary:by compulsion, force along, impel, urge, compel, energy, initiative, go along before an impelling force.
You get the drift.
When you write, determination and discipline combine to keep you going, but it is the act of writing itself, the act of creating something, that is so satisfying, and which generates the momentum that keeps you moving forward. 

Writing Update

I'm forty three thousand words into the first draft of the final book in my urban fantasy trilogy, Samsara. Mapping out the scenes in more detail is helping, but I still find, especially when I've written something like, 'hand to hand fighting', I have to go back to square one and figure out the choreography of the action. On the whole, though, the more detailed the scene, the easier the words flow. 

Even though I've some way to go, I'm already feeling sad that this is the last in the series, and I'll be saying goodbye to these characters before the end of the year. Still, on the upside, I'll have room for some new ones to occupy.

Links:

If you're a Wattpad member, I have several short stories posted on the site: https://www.wattpad.com/teagankearney

https://twitter.com/@teagankearney
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I've also (finally) made it onto face book, though I'm still not sure what I'm doing there: https://www.facebook.com/teagankearney

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To all story lovers out there, good reading, and to those of you who write, good writing. 




Gearing up again ...


Writing Update

Resting a novel between drafts is a necessary step, but after finishing the first draft of Book Two of Samsara, (the paranormal trilogy currently occupying my internal landscape) I felt as if I had a permanent itch. Keeping busy with other projects was like slavering the spot with calamine lotion which provided only temporary relief. However returning to edit with a fresh eye is worth the wait.

My experience is limited, but so far, writing each first draft has been different. The first draft of Book One, Tatya's Return, came out in a flood. Written during the 2013 nanowrimo it emerged on to the page with noticeably greater ease than the earlier battle with my debut novel. The first draft of Book Two has been trickier; half-way between a vigorous love making session and a bout in the boxing ring, where I finished up exhilarated and exhausted. Editing will be the re-match, and despite the effort involved in endlessly pressing Ctrl+F, Ctrl+V, I’m eager to start. 

When revising, I use a method similar to triage. Like a doctor with a patient, I tackle the most drastic tasks first, before turning my attention to the smaller, if more painstakingly labour intensive, but equally necessary jobs needed to achieve good health. 

My first step is a read through, so I print out a hard copy. Next, red highlighter in hand, alert and poised to strike, I’ll go through the manuscript making notes. These could refer to plot, dialogue, characters, action, or setting. For example, I’ve already decided to move the inciting incident forward. This is bound to have a knock-on effect, and require re-jigging of subsequent sections – but that’s part of the course. When I’m finished, even an Alan Turing would have trouble decoding the massacred pages, and Jackson Pollock would be proud of me.

This stage complete, back to the laptop to make these changes, then on to the grammar/spelling/style edit for which I use Pro Writing Aid. One thing I’ve invested in during this breather is an upgrade from the free version of this software program to the premium edition. I spent a chunk of my break trying this out on my 2012 nano, and couldn’t believe how much easier the process was, and how much more quickly I worked through the bruising list of corrections.

A second read through – aloud and taking it slow while paying as much attention as I can muster, correcting as I work, in spite of which something always slips through. When I’m confident the edition I have is acceptable for others, I send it off to my beta-readers, which creates another breathing space.

This rhythm of intense engagement, followed by a putting aside, allows a fresh perspective, and curbs the tendency to develop the wood for the trees syndrome. How long you rest your work depends on the individual, but Stephen King in his On Writing suggests a minimum of six weeks. And this is how long I’ve taken, while still giving myself a decent chance of meeting my deadline of publishing in October.

If this creates the impression of organized efficiency, that’s wonderful, but the actuality will be fairly chaotic, because I’m also re-decorating the living room. This includes sanding and re-painting book cases and tables, plus periodic attempts at clearing the garden to create a path so I can foray out for supplies!

A recent twitter conversation between writers focussed on the topic of so long as I’m writing, everything is okay. Now while this may not be a universal truth, it’s something I wholeheartedly endorse at this point in my life. I've become that bouncy enthusiastic kid in the back seat of the car who’s forever asking ‘Are we nearly there yet?’ Well, the answer is yes, and I can’t wait to start!

Today’s Haiku
SUMMER
sun shining through glass
glitters over surfaces -
refracting jewels

Useful Links:
Two editing software programs - both with free online editions.
https://prowritingaid.com
www.grammarly.com

I’d love it if you checked out either of my novels, or popped over to Wattpad and read any of my posted stories ... just click on the links to the right.

Join me on Twitter at: teagankearney@modhaiku

To all story lovers out there, good reading, and to those of you who write, good writing.

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